The eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month.

by John on November 13, 2012

I was born in England after WWII, and I still remember the paper red poppies, sold as the remembrance of Armistice Day, celebrated by Veterans Day in the U.S.   I wrote this piece several years ago, and somehow, on this most recent Veterans Day, the realities of war seemed lost in the force of present events.  Yet we should remember another force; the words of the soldier poets that speak to a connected individuality deep within us all.

Until WW I, poems glorified war.  Minds at War, The Poetry and Experience of the First World War covers the change from the nationalistic enthusiasm of Rupert Brooke with the patriotic opening lines of Soldier, “If I should die, think only this of me:/ That there’s some corner of a foreign field/That is for ever England.”, to Wilfred Owen’s immortal Dulce et Decorum Est, an unbelievably horrific description of a young soldier too slow to put on his mask in a poison gas attack.  The title and the Latin in the last lines come from an ode by the Roman poet, Horace

My friend, you would not tell with such high zest

To children ardent for some desperate glory,

The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est

Pro patria mori.

(literally, “Sweet and honorable it is, to die for the fatherland”).

The American school of WW II poetry had been ignored until Harvey Shapiro, former editor of The New York Times Magazine, published Poets of World War II.  Shapiro, who flew 35 missions in Italy in WWII, served as tail gunner in a B-17.  The poems selected offer a wide range of perspectives.  Defeat by Witter Bynner, describes how the German prisoners in Texas were treated with more respect than the black G.I.’s   He gives us one of the few widely read and anthologized poems of the war, Death of the Ball Turret Gunner by Randall Jarrell

From my mother’s sleep I fell into the State,

 And I hunched in its belly till my wet fur froze.

 Six miles from earth, loosed from its dream of life,

 I woke to black flak and the nightmare fighters.

 When I died they washed me out of the turret with a hose.

Jarrell’s notes on the poem; “A ball turret was a Plexiglas sphere set into the belly of a B-17 or B-24, and inhabited by two .50 caliber machine-guns and one man, a short small man. When this gunner tracked with his machine guns a fighter attacking his bomber from below, he revolved with the turret; hunched upside-down in his little sphere, he looked like the foetus in the womb. The fighters which attacked him were armed with cannon firing explosive shells. The hose was a steam hose.”

Perhaps no soldier poet anthology better captures the Vietnam war than  Unaccustomed Mercy, Soldier Poets of the Vietnam War, edited by W.D. Ehrhart, which contains several works by Horace Coleman.  However, Coleman’s hard to find collection of his own poems, In the Grass, is the most powerful as he speaks of combat, yet brings the war back to America in Still Life with Dead Hippie. Kent State, May 4, 1970.  His poems also look to the future.  Writing about an event in which protesters, including John Kerry, threw their medals back at the government and demanded better treatment for veterans, Coleman’s In the Grass gives us Notes for the Veteran’s War Protest


Ralph: concerning plans for the local march,

 the following:

 1. Saw the weary demonstration in Washington,

 the burning faces of our sad boy warriors

 throwing their medals at the president.

 2. Think we should emulate but not copy, so:

 when the delegation arrives at the state capitol

 first read the petition:

 “We are not afraid to kill. We are sorry we murdered

 our souls. We did as told but we learned how to say NO!

 Stop it. Or we will stop you. Don’t resist. You can’t stop

 the ghosts you made of us.”

 Next, have those who lost legs crawl forward and neatly

 stack them. Then bowl the skull of your best killed buddy

 down the aisle.

 Finally, have the blind push the quadruplegics forward

 (they will have knives in their teeth to give to the legislators

 to use on themselves). We leave. If they don’t use them we

 come back.


 PS. Save the instructions for your grandkids. They’ll come in handy.

Iraq is producing its own poetry, personified in Here, Bullet by Brian Turner, who served a year as an infantry team leader in Iraq in 2003.  One poem I simply couldn’t finish, as I knew where it was going. but here’s the title piece, which Turner wrote, put in a plastic bag, and carried in his breast pocket throughout his tour of duty.

Here, Bullet


If a body is what you want,

 then here is bone and gristle and flesh.

 Here is the clavicle-snapped wish,

 the aorta’s opened valves, the leap

 thought makes at the synaptic gap.

 Here is the adrenaline rush you crave,

 that inexorable flight, that insane puncture

 into heat and blood. And I dare you to finish

 what you’ve started. Because here, Bullet,

 here is where I complete the word you bring

 hissing through the air, here is where I moan

 the barrel’s cold esophagus, triggering

 my tongue’s explosives for the rifling I have

 inside of me, each twist of the round

 spun deeper, because here, Bullet,

 here is where the world ends, every time.

 These books diverge completely from the war visions of politicians.  In her essay, The Magic of Images: Word and Picture in a Media Age, Camille Paglia notes that it essential for the word and the book to mediate the never ending assault of new media advertising and propaganda so we can truly comprehend our world.  The soldier poets’ words do just that.




Copyright reserved by the authors of the poems.

Minds at War  Roberts (ed)                                           ISBN 0 952 8969 0 7

Poems of World War II  Shapiro (ed)                          ISBN-10: 1931082332

Unaccustomed Mercy Ehrhart (ed)                              ISBN-13: 978-0896721906

In the Grass   Coleman , Horace                                    ISBN: 1885215-14-2

Here, Bullet   Turner, Brian                                             ISBN: 1-882295-55-2

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SeanVN June 14, 2013 at 6:40 pm

Well it is all about genetics. That is where all this behavior stems from. However we no longer live in small villages with low personal mobility where we all share the same basket of genetic code. We live in vast assemblages where there is as much genetic difference between ourselves and our neighbors as there is between ourselves and a person in a different country. Hence there is a programming error in our genetic code due to having evolved in small highly related groups.


Clarinda July 19, 2016 at 8:09 am

That’s an inugoines way of thinking about it.


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